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AP Squares

Design Design \ Uncategorized | 07/29/05 @634 | WilhelmRahn | Comments critiques (7) | Views views (481)


AP Squares
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Image taken from Stock.XCHNG site ( Original Photo by Joumana Medlej A.k.a alpaca)

I made the pagoda a lot larger, and took the rest of the stuff out. and well.. you can see the result.

Please, FULL VIEW, it looks fuzzy when small, cuz i had to resize it a lot.

Comments & Critiques Welcome
 
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Avatar Diane

 07/29/05 @698

Nice work but I think it should be in the design section. Clean and simple, I like it!
+7
 
Avatar OXXID

 07/29/05 @716

Very nice work Wilhelm (thumbup)
I like your style :)
+7
 
xXSweetreatXx

 08/01/05 @109

Very Nice =]
 
Avatar cupcake

 08/06/05 @854

I agree it should be in design.
Overall a very good design.
+8
 
Avatar zimm

 08/06/05 @858

good stuff, gives the pagoda an image of strength and largitude
 
Avatar Toshiba-3

 08/06/05 @870

Interesting presentation.
Good way to design an architectural picture.
(thumbup)
 
Avatar nomaD42

 10/15/05 @216

I'm sorry, but I'm a bit lost in the reasoning behind the piece.
I don't see the justification for fragmenting the pagoda, or see any message that is trying to be delivered. The way the pagoda is cut apart it looks very misaligned, even though I understand that the pieces are parallel, but with the angles it appears disjointed. Also, the only text is the word "WAR", but where is the correlation behind a pagoda (a symbol of peace) and the word WAR. Also, what is the reasoning behind the font choice?
The dark squares are also quite distracting. Was this just something to show that you can cut up a stock photo? or is there a commercial application for the image?
I'm sorry to come accross as so critical, but I hope it inspires you to reexamine the idea and work to improve it.
Have a nice day.
 
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